tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9110753663561022536.post3626186243944722628..comments2023-07-09T19:51:41.239-07:00Comments on mmhmmm: Surprise (a smutty short) ~warning for goremarcushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08434115863681449914noreply@blogger.comBlogger44125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9110753663561022536.post-1544489981554670702020-03-01T11:02:56.524-08:002020-03-01T11:02:56.524-08:00strait up can't tell if dev was brought back t...strait up can't tell if dev was brought back to life or if the two were sitting in dev's blood at thee end Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9110753663561022536.post-59918185016018303362014-11-02T01:57:53.816-07:002014-11-02T01:57:53.816-07:00Wow this reminds me so much of a BL manga called &...Wow this reminds me so much of a BL manga called "Kanpai! dj - Unapai" with the sex and guts spilling and immortality and all :3Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9110753663561022536.post-65198998252585128882013-08-02T18:58:23.358-07:002013-08-02T18:58:23.358-07:00♥
Thank you so much for your kind words.
(sorry...♥<br /><br />Thank you so much for your kind words. <br /><br />(sorry for my late reply, my comment notifications got turned off somehow)marcushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08434115863681449914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9110753663561022536.post-82477958632639039162013-02-23T12:16:22.289-08:002013-02-23T12:16:22.289-08:00Your writing is amazing. I loved how you put hints...Your writing is amazing. I loved how you put hints here and there about how it was about to be. I mean, how Nasr's dick seems to push Dev's gut up : it amazed me and made me think about Poe's stories, where little hints are driving the reader to a terrific climax, which is quite litteral concerning your stories! Not only was it erotic and frightening for the reader, it was for the character. In a very twisted way, you managed to make the reader feel the pleasure, the pain and the «surprise» Devon felt, this through the writing. Since I'm not a native speaker, it is quite hard for me to elaborate about the writing process, as I would do in my language. But I am well aware of your skills, that's why I'd like to thank you for such a well composed piece. It is plainly wonderful ; you were able to melt pain and pleasure, death and sex, Dev's «petite mort» is in fact absolute. It terrified me. I gripped my thighs, swallowed hard because for a few seconds, through a few lines, I clearly felt what you wrote.<br />It may sound excessive, but that's how it felt. Real, painful, wonderful. That's why I'm still frightened. But thank you anyway. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9110753663561022536.post-75708156981153364082011-12-31T15:24:25.705-08:002011-12-31T15:24:25.705-08:00Alas, no. Devon is afforded no such relief.Alas, no. Devon is afforded no such relief.marcushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08434115863681449914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9110753663561022536.post-83816403484501500432011-12-29T13:46:49.934-08:002011-12-29T13:46:49.934-08:00Oh, god. Like o.o it's just a thought but mayb...Oh, god. Like o.o it's just a thought but maybe he got turned into a demon?Loveless_runnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16024572361752038641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9110753663561022536.post-91846968970448384432011-10-07T03:15:53.774-07:002011-10-07T03:15:53.774-07:00Oh, thanks!
I'd love some back story, too.
F...Oh, thanks!<br /><br />I'd love some back story, too.<br /><br />From what I understand Devon is adopted, has some kind of linking to St. Francis and the stigma, had an ex-lover who was abusing him far worse than Nasr and who was killed by Nasr. And Nasr is a fallen angel of some kind.<br /><br />That reminds me of two story of mine that I occasionally work on. The first is about demons and so called "demon charmers". The charmers are half-demons/half-angels, born to human mothers. Their purpose is to come in contact with the ancient demons who due to their imense strenght can't keep a constant form and threaten to bring back chaos to the world. The charmers take part of that power and help keep the balance. The charmers become the demons' lovers but more like their "queens" because they are concidered "pure blood" and stronger than both angels and demons. They answer to no one but the balance that they are meant to protect. The charmers are also immortal. <br /><br />The second is about the idea that vampires were once angels who fell in love with other angels, which is concidered to be the greatest sin of all. Once they are found out and punished they are sent to the human world. But they are cursed to teint their once holly blood with that of humans just to keep their dead hearts beating in order to find their mate, who may be turned into the living-dead or humans. Some become insane and the blood lust takes over but others preserve their sanity and after centuries find what they are searching for. However, the true curse starts from there.<br /><br />Me being tidy is a phenomenon on it's own. And sorry if the above was out of place >.>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9110753663561022536.post-59888922493874356532011-10-06T22:31:32.326-07:002011-10-06T22:31:32.326-07:00Oh, sure. Lucky is just sort of a typical interact...Oh, sure. Lucky is just sort of a typical interaction somewhere between 2:21 & Surprise. The time span between each one of those stories is fairly significant. We're talking years between Polite Introductions & Surprise, with the other three staggered between.marcushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08434115863681449914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9110753663561022536.post-47448774275293404252011-10-06T04:48:57.447-07:002011-10-06T04:48:57.447-07:00I'm one to love timelines in stories so can I ...I'm one to love timelines in stories so can I ask what follows what and what the time span between them is - Polite Introductions, 2:21, Nothing in Pink, Surprise, Lucky? <br /><br />Been obsessing with your site and stories since yesterday, lols.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9110753663561022536.post-40633958458430160272011-10-05T10:54:04.995-07:002011-10-05T10:54:04.995-07:00When both parties are immorta/unkillable...I'm...When both parties are immorta/unkillable...I'm all for gore!<br /><br />Really well developed chars and I don't think that either would chanage much (don't need to, though) but either might accept the other as they are and that even if in arsehole + psycho masochist universe is ok in my book.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9110753663561022536.post-41640650435562809972011-09-26T15:24:41.517-07:002011-09-26T15:24:41.517-07:00I was listening to the song "Meant To Die&quo...I was listening to the song "Meant To Die" by The Used and it made me think of these two. This story especially. hehehe ;pAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9110753663561022536.post-86633667107150425562011-09-17T20:26:42.823-07:002011-09-17T20:26:42.823-07:00I'm hoping it'll promote some good karma t...I'm hoping it'll promote some good karma to come my way. C:<br /><br />Sweet! I'll definitely look forward to it!<br /><br />That makes sense. Though to be honest, you don't strike me as anyone who's particularly isolated. Cx And if I'm not too nosey, what style of dance are you learning?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9110753663561022536.post-64459923985102124692011-09-15T23:42:57.463-07:002011-09-15T23:42:57.463-07:00That is very kind of you. :)
Spectre will be comi...That is very kind of you. :)<br /><br />Spectre will be coming here: http://spectrecomic.com/ . We're hoping to roll it out the beginning of October. <br /><br />I enrolled in dance because I wanted more human interaction outside of when I'm working with my clients. This meant that I would have to give something up. But if I do dance classes, I can have interaction and just cut back on my biking/running/hiking.marcushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08434115863681449914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9110753663561022536.post-17276752357165444772011-09-15T22:37:12.423-07:002011-09-15T22:37:12.423-07:00Ah, I do understand that.
I have a job interview n...Ah, I do understand that.<br />I have a job interview next week... and I'll tell you what, if I get the job, I'll donate to this wonderful site. C:<br /><br />I was wondering about that! I heard you mention Spectre earlier and tried to google it with no findings. Nanowrimo is intense! I had a friend who did that, and I hardily saw them for the entire month. <br /><br />Wow, I'm surprised you manage to find any free time at all! What compelled you to enroll in dance?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9110753663561022536.post-18054355822551537172011-09-15T19:40:24.102-07:002011-09-15T19:40:24.102-07:00I would spend all of my time writing stories if I ...I would spend all of my time writing stories if I could. :( Unfortunately, free internet porn does not pay the bills (or even for itself). I'm always planning on writing more, but right now most of my time is either spent working or looking for work. <br /><br />I have recently updated Piety, and have also been scripting out Spectre. Felix/Weissner is currently drawing that to give us a cushion before we start releasing it, and it will be updated every week. I am masochistically considering participating in Nanowrimo this year. That will also keep the shorts sporadic if I do. <br /><br />Plus, for whatever reason, I decided I wasn't busy enough and enrolled in dance classes on Tuesday & Wednesday nights. Ha!marcushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08434115863681449914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9110753663561022536.post-25579146377974942932011-09-15T17:15:43.875-07:002011-09-15T17:15:43.875-07:00So, are you planning on writing any more stories.....So, are you planning on writing any more stories....anytime soon? >.>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9110753663561022536.post-67205247793025547612011-09-15T09:55:11.724-07:002011-09-15T09:55:11.724-07:00Yup :)Yup :)marcushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08434115863681449914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9110753663561022536.post-84152198382521301882011-09-14T21:52:12.210-07:002011-09-14T21:52:12.210-07:00OH! That makes sense. Does that mean Devon is adop...OH! That makes sense. Does that mean Devon is adopted?Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06826040810247529661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9110753663561022536.post-66335630485970968802011-09-14T20:27:14.531-07:002011-09-14T20:27:14.531-07:00It is. Further, in this story, Devon does not even...It is. Further, in this story, Devon does not even know that his name is not Devon James White. Not that that is in any way indicated, but it's a nice little aside.marcushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08434115863681449914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9110753663561022536.post-63871921389749819072011-09-14T17:28:53.597-07:002011-09-14T17:28:53.597-07:00I see!
And another clarification I totally forgot ...I see!<br />And another clarification I totally forgot about until I reread 2:21... So Nasr Killed Devon's boyfriend Michael, which Devon coincidentally has the same middle name as. I'm assuming it's just coincidence... but is it? O:Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06826040810247529661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9110753663561022536.post-19933041621247422562011-09-13T22:01:24.196-07:002011-09-13T22:01:24.196-07:00It's quite alright. The hows of it are not exp...It's quite alright. The hows of it are not explained beyond the fact that Nasr entered into some sort of arrangement with Uriel. This story is more how it is revealed to Devon than how it came about.<br /><br />Nasr's tails/horns/claw fingers/freakish teeth/other demony accessories come and go at Nasr's will (though are sometimes forced). <br /><br />I'm glad you've been enjoying the stories & the characters! :Dmarcushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08434115863681449914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9110753663561022536.post-1264275964069324132011-09-13T18:44:49.366-07:002011-09-13T18:44:49.366-07:00First of all, I adore anything and everything Devo...First of all, I adore anything and everything Devon & Nasreddin. I've probably read every story with them about 7 or 8 times over the last 3 days. <br />I have a tough time deciding upon which story with them is my favorite... I really like this one, but I also really "Nothing in Pink" and all the Pretty, pretty princess banter. <br />But seriously, If I had to choose to read about the same two characters for the rest of my life, I'd probably choose them.<br /><br />So two things I wanted to ask about; Firstly, (In case I missed something) How is it Dev is immortal now? At first, I thought this was the story of how it came about, and that the whole gutting thing was part of the whole ritual process. But after rereading it, I'm not so sure. <br />Second is Nasr's Tail. It's there in "Polite Introductions" And in a lot of the art work. But then it's gone/unmentioned in others. So does he have the power to bring it out at will or is it a time of day thing....? <br />(I realize, I'm over-thinking in both situations... but that's what happens when I get obsessed by a really good story/characters.)Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06826040810247529661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9110753663561022536.post-78698595753493619522011-09-05T12:36:53.088-07:002011-09-05T12:36:53.088-07:00Why thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying wh...Why thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying what we have to offer. :Dmarcushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08434115863681449914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9110753663561022536.post-14386530927386964162011-09-04T23:00:12.241-07:002011-09-04T23:00:12.241-07:00I can't help but love these two. I found your ...I can't help but love these two. I found your site a few days ago... and i'm thoroughly obsessed. XDAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9110753663561022536.post-89558030528186809762011-08-15T13:12:29.995-07:002011-08-15T13:12:29.995-07:00I already have two novels that I don't have th...I already have two novels that I don't have the time to write that I'm working on. I'm not sure I'll ever write that one. <br /><br />But. You are very astute. I like you.marcushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08434115863681449914noreply@blogger.com